Haiku

haiku 19/04/2018

serve me kingfish raw

    my bank balance hit the floor

           yet still I crave more
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Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Hi Jeff, not sure why your haiku did not place higher... Well done.
Kantor Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Couldn’t agree more Line!! Lol
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:04 PM
- Congratulations on your 6st place in the haiku contest, Jeff :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kantor Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Wow thank you
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Kantor Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Tx Susan
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