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lines of bubbles pop the lake breathes... no... tench feeding anglers hearts... racing...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/19/2018 4:08:00 AM
fabulous imagery love that aha moment:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/19/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thanks Jan, was always an ah moment for me... hugs Mick
Date: 4/19/2018 2:28:00 AM
I'm not a fisherman but I can imagine the excitement, great image Mick. Tom.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/19/2018 1:16:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. I was, and it definitely got my heart thumping, as it usually meant you were in for a good session... Mick

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