Haiku

lines of bubbles pop the lake breathes... no... tench feeding anglers hearts... racing...
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Allison Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:08 AM
fabulous imagery love that aha moment:-) hugs Jan xx
Talbot Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Thanks Jan, was always an ah moment for me... hugs Mick
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:28 AM
I'm not a fisherman but I can imagine the excitement, great image Mick. Tom.
Talbot Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Thanks, Tom. I was, and it definitely got my heart thumping, as it usually meant you were in for a good session... Mick
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