Haiku

scary viperfish

ugliness understated

devour at own risk

4/18/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations - congratulations on your win! I enjoyed reading this clever haiku! Hugs. Pandita
Pett Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:16 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Pandita, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:05 PM
Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Roy.
Pett Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:44 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Line, your support is really appreciated. :))
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Congrats on your great placement, Roy!
Pett Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:43 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Andrea much appreciated. :))
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2st place in the haiku contest, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Anne-Lise, your support is really appreciated. :))
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Back to congratulate. Well done!
Pett Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Susan much appreciated. :))
Gentry Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Ewww! No thanks... excellent haiku. Good luck!
Pett Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thanks Susan for your very kind comment and best wishes, I’m certainly with you on this one Ewww! to true. :))
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:32 AM
Love it Roy, that's one mean looking fish. Good luck. Tom.
Pett Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Thanks Tom for your very kind comment and best wishes, they are quite menacing definitely not my cup of tea. :))
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Awesome Haiku, Roy, luck in the contest! .. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pett Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:42 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Eve, there are a few species of viperfish and they are all quite menacing. thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
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