Haiku

sun speckled small fry

      dart riotously around

             slow swaying sea kelp



18/04/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:07 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jean.
Murray Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Thank you Line.
Pett Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jean with your great haiku. :))
Murray Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Good evening Roy. It's always a thrill. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 1:58 PM
- Congratulations on your 2st place in the haiku contest, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:10 PM
It's a lovely feeling to get a placement . Thank you.
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:44 PM
A great haiku. Congratulations on your win.
Murray Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Susan.
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 3:53 AM
- Excellent haiku, Jean :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:08 AM
Good morning Anne-Lise. Thank you as always for your sunshine visits.
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:53 AM
Lovely image Jean, lovely day here,about time too. Good luck. Tom.
Murray Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Indeed Tom. At least the evenings are getting a good stretch. Thank you for your visit.
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Lovely contrast, Jean. Beautiful haiku.
Murray Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 3:16 AM
That's lovely to hear from you who knows them so well Line. Thank you.
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:02 PM
lovely imagery Jean:-) hugs jan xx
Murray Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Hi Jan. Heat wave hit you yet? Very windy here today. Instead of stripping off we are battening down the hatches. Thank you as always for your lovely visits.
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