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HAIKU

         rising sap falling
 as budding branch is severed
     birch crying spring tears

16/04/2018

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Date: 4/23/2018 10:05:00 PM
Lovely and unique word painting, Jean ... Congratulations ...
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/24/2018 3:09:00 AM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 4/18/2018 11:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful haiku!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/19/2018 3:18:00 AM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 4/17/2018 9:56:00 PM
Great Haiku, Jean, congratulation on your win! :) .. Hugs Eve
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/18/2018 1:11:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 4/17/2018 8:03:00 PM
So beautiful.... I see it.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2018 2:28:00 PM
Impossible, when you talk everybody listens...
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/18/2018 1:11:00 AM
Hi Pashang. My poor tree. We built the deck around it. It is about thirty years old. I sit beneath it often. It will never talk to me again I fear. I best give it a hug.
Date: 4/17/2018 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jean, excellent Haiku, thoroughly enjoyed. :))
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 4:37:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Roy and thank you.
Date: 4/17/2018 10:34:00 AM
The richness flows with imagery, Jean! Congrats!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 4/17/2018 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful win! Back with congrats dear poetess :) xomo!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you poetess.
Date: 4/17/2018 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place, Jean!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you L.J.
Date: 4/17/2018 8:52:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 1:38:00 PM
Big hug back Jan. Thank you.
Date: 4/17/2018 8:42:00 AM
Excellent, Jean! Janice
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 4/17/2018 8:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 11:55:00 AM
I hug you back to thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 4/17/2018 8:00:00 AM
An exceptional haiku! Early spring birch sap, delicious. Well deserved congratulations Jean.. Mick
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thank you for such high placement Mike. Haikus are lovely when I get them right.
Date: 4/17/2018 7:46:00 AM
Lovely. Congrats on your gold medal win, Jean.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 4/17/2018 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations Jean Tom.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/17/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Tom.
Date: 4/16/2018 2:14:00 PM
Oh how absolutely beautiful Jean. Superb imagery. A wondrous haiku, my friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/16/2018 2:50:00 PM
God evening Susan. Thank you so much.
Date: 4/16/2018 10:02:00 AM
Lovely Haiku, wonderful imagery Jean I can see feel and taste it :) xomo!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/16/2018 10:36:00 AM
Hi Maureen. Thank you . Nice to see you.
Date: 4/16/2018 6:48:00 AM
Perfect image Jean, I know because I'm cutting an old tree down at the moment the sap acts like a brake on the blade. Didn't know you could make tea. Good luck. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/16/2018 8:02:00 AM
haha Jean I wondered if it was a bit of blarney, I kissed it years ago, I never shut up now lol.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/16/2018 6:52:00 AM
Hello Tom. I love my cuppa but that's the Irish coming out in me. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 4/16/2018 6:11:00 AM
lovely haiku Jean, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/16/2018 6:22:00 AM
Thank you and good afternoon Jan. Another dull day here. Fingers crossed for that promised heat wave.
Date: 4/16/2018 5:54:00 AM
The image comes alive in this short poem..lovely capture: birch crying spring tears. Great haiku, Jean.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/16/2018 5:59:00 AM
Good morning Vijay and thank you for your visit.
Date: 4/16/2018 5:19:00 AM
- Well done, Jean - Great ! - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/16/2018 5:24:00 AM
Good morning Sunshine. I could not believe the amount of that precious liquid I collected. I read that it makes nice woody flavoured tea. Instead I gave those nutrients to my confined to barracks house plants. A little taste of freedom.