Haiku 100

Haiku 100
	
	
	by warm candlelight
	a strand of pearls gently falls 
	across her bare breasts

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Donna Jones

November 23, 2013 at 5:48 PM

Jack..this is classically beautiful... and my hat's off to you for your 100th haiku...wow...PS..did you get any of this nasty freezing rain I did yesterday? Yuk!

Richard Lamoureux

November 20, 2013 at 2:34 PM

Hi Jack, I appreciate you taking my feedback into consideration. I enjoyed reading this beauty again. A stunning piece!

Charlotte Puddifoot

November 17, 2013 at 6:24 PM

beautiful haiku, jack, erotic yet elegant...

Jack Jordan

November 17, 2013 at 9:09 PM

Thanks, Charlotte. I'm working on, thinking about your contest... Jack

Nette Onclaud

November 14, 2013 at 10:33 AM

ohhh, this is smashing in its breathtaking imagery.. pearls, candles, breast... let me sigh!.. greeat one, jack!..:) huggs

Jack Jordan

November 14, 2013 at 3:55 PM

Thanks, Nette. I always appreciate your comments... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2013 at 4:24 PM

a very luscious image! No, I don't know of the sculpture you mentioned. I don't know much about those things.

Jack Jordan

November 13, 2013 at 6:29 PM

Thanks... Spiral Jetty is among the most important sculptures of the period, and occasionally disappears below the water surface. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 13, 2013 at 3:57 AM

- Romantic!! - (Congratulations on your haiku 100) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

November 13, 2013 at 1:58 PM

My intentions exactly. I really like your new photo... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

November 12, 2013 at 10:03 PM

I would change your to her and it will be perfection. I can picture the scene. This is an exquisite image. Thanks for letting me Know you posted it. Congratulations on hitting your landmark.

Jack Jordan

November 12, 2013 at 10:05 PM

Done... Thanks for the congrats and the great suggestion... Jack