haiku 100

she walks with angels in heaven's angelic realm on clouds of fine silk dark grey winter day casket lowered into ground coldness in the heart

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Date: 4/20/2024 3:21:00 PM

Such a contrast but how much better is new life after this one. Reading below here, did your mother recently pass away? My condolences.

Date: 3/13/2024 12:24:00 PM

I am saddened at your loss. It has been 26 years since my mother's death, but I think about her and my father in some way everyday. Sara K

Date: 2/26/2024 6:50:00 PM

I lost an Aunt this week. With this I think of her.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/28/2024 10:32:00 AM

Thank you for your comment and so sorry for the loss of your Aunt. May she rest in peace. love phyl

Date: 2/10/2024 11:03:00 AM

Two lovely haiku.... nice arrangement of words..

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/28/2024 10:31:00 AM

Thank you S1 for your comments. love phyl

Date: 2/9/2024 6:28:00 AM

Great write. I think mom would be proud of your words.,

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/10/2024 2:14:00 PM

Thank you Paul for your kind words. love phyl

Date: 2/8/2024 12:27:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your sad yet lovely Haiku write. FAV for me... Have a wonderful day....................

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/8/2024 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Paula for making it a fav. So nice of you. It is a sad time and feeling the blues on the loss of mom. love phyl

Date: 2/8/2024 11:34:00 AM

- Always cold on days like this, Phyllis ... heart pumping slowly ... as if paralyzed ... sadness in your lines, my friend :( - hugs

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/8/2024 2:43:00 PM

Thanks my friend it has been a hard time and missing mom as we talked every day. love phyl