Haiku

*** warm breath... wispy clouds freezing... cold... minus twenty white mustaches grow ****
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Lawless Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 11:14 PM
worked outside for 35 years and do so remember the days of frozen "stache" and the little "snotsickles" hanging from them.
Talbot Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 1:12 AM
Snotsickles, love it, just the word '-) Thanks for stopping by John, appreciated... Mick
Ashley Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 10:12 PM
Beautiful and frosty imagery excellently expressed, Mick. Stunning! Warmest wishes (are really needed here.. :)) ~Susan
Talbot Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 1:09 AM
Thanks Susan! Best warmest Poetry hugs on there way... Mick
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Good one Mick, snow forecast for Easter weekend.Must dig out the ski mask lol.
Talbot Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Thanks Tom, sending the snow back your way LOL
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:41 PM
What a striking image you have created, Mick! Now I can reveal why I never grew a moustache:) Regards // paul
Talbot Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Haha, thanks Paul. Best wishes... Mick
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