Haiku

*** warm breath... wispy clouds freezing... cold... minus twenty white mustaches grow ****

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Date: 3/24/2018 11:14:00 PM

worked outside for 35 years and do so remember the days of frozen "stache" and the little "snotsickles" hanging from them.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/25/2018 1:12:00 AM

Snotsickles, love it, just the word '-) Thanks for stopping by John, appreciated... Mick

Date: 3/24/2018 10:12:00 PM

Beautiful and frosty imagery excellently expressed, Mick. Stunning! Warmest wishes (are really needed here.. :)) ~Susan

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/25/2018 1:09:00 AM

Thanks Susan! Best warmest Poetry hugs on there way... Mick

Date: 3/24/2018 5:46:00 PM

Good one Mick, snow forecast for Easter weekend.Must dig out the ski mask lol.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/24/2018 6:54:00 PM

Thanks Tom, sending the snow back your way LOL

Date: 3/24/2018 5:41:00 PM

What a striking image you have created, Mick! Now I can reveal why I never grew a moustache:) Regards // paul

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/24/2018 6:56:00 PM

Haha, thanks Paul. Best wishes... Mick