Haiku

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ rainwater nature's tears... slip between each petal... a bouquet refreshed... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/9/2018 4:30:00 AM

Oh Mick I read shadows poem and it was so moving, I'm sure she will be delighted by your poetic response:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/9/2018 4:43:00 AM

Hope so, pity we can't use emoticons, I'd of sent her a bouquet with it. ;-) hugs Mick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2018 7:32:00 PM

oh, yes, I just saw the winners' list and remember that one line you liked so much in Shadow's! So pretty. Thanks for that haiku contest.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/9/2018 4:25:00 AM

Andrea, No worries, there was/is a lot of inspiration that came out of that contest, even those that didn't qualify were so inclined. Thanks for participating in my first, hope to read you in my next contest, again with haiku, no theme this time. Best wishes... Mick

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2018 10:14:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Mick.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/8/2018 3:45:00 PM

With a little help from a friend, thanks, Tom... Mick

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/8/2018 9:08:00 AM

Love the idea of “rainwater tears” slipping through petals! Beautiful haiku, Mick!

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/8/2018 1:03:00 PM

Laura, I can't take full credit, the line you refer was borrowed from Shadow of the Past, it is that line in her haiku that inspired me to write mine. I will pass on your appreciation... Many thanks... Mick

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/8/2018 8:42:00 AM

Hello Mick, a beautiful haiku. Have a nice day my friend.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/8/2018 12:58:00 PM

Hi Darlene, Thank you, and may all days be nice and warm... Mick