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rainwater nature's
tears... slip between each petal... 
a bouquet refreshed... 

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Jan Allison

March 9, 2018 at 4:30 AM

Oh Mick I read shadows poem and it was so moving, I'm sure she will be delighted by your poetic response:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot

March 9, 2018 at 4:43 AM

Hope so, pity we can't use emoticons, I'd of sent her a bouquet with it. ;-) hugs Mick

Andrea Dietrich

March 8, 2018 at 7:32 PM

oh, yes, I just saw the winners' list and remember that one line you liked so much in Shadow's! So pretty. Thanks for that haiku contest.

Mick Talbot

March 9, 2018 at 4:25 AM

Andrea, No worries, there was/is a lot of inspiration that came out of that contest, even those that didn't qualify were so inclined. Thanks for participating in my first, hope to read you in my next contest, again with haiku, no theme this time. Best wishes... Mick

Tom Cunningham

March 8, 2018 at 10:14 AM

Beautiful haiku Mick.

Mick Talbot

March 8, 2018 at 3:45 PM

With a little help from a friend, thanks, Tom... Mick

Laura Leiser

March 8, 2018 at 9:08 AM

Love the idea of “rainwater tears” slipping through petals! Beautiful haiku, Mick!

Mick Talbot

March 8, 2018 at 1:03 PM

Laura, I can't take full credit, the line you refer was borrowed from Shadow of the Past, it is that line in her haiku that inspired me to write mine. I will pass on your appreciation... Many thanks... Mick