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Haiku 1001

clouds engulf the sky mountains spear the night to day sunbursts spew forthwith Entry to contest sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A Contest name: Any haiku will do Written by: Carol Sunshine Brown

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/6/2022 11:25:00 AM

Beautiful imagery.. Blessings

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/12/2022 4:08:00 AM

Excellent creation. I love the imagery. The sight is very vivid. Great job. Blessings always!

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/6/2019 9:24:00 AM

Very nice haiku!

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/11/2018 3:35:00 PM

I'm sorry to have deleted my original account. You'll never know how many times I've checked in on you. I hope you're okay.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/9/2017 7:26:00 PM

Yes, I see it; beautifully penned imagery.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 7:01:00 AM

Three picturesque lines that paint graphic pictures and then, grab the heart. Nicely written.

Funom Makama

Date: 7/22/2015 11:37:00 AM

this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!

Delli Thami

Date: 4/4/2015 3:17:00 PM

lovely haiku!

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 12/27/2014 4:57:00 AM

Very picturesque and dreamy! Love it:) Taha

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/13/2014 3:24:00 AM

haiku 1001..great.Interesting..God bless Carol...Love XXXX rajat

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/20/2014 1:22:00 AM

Exquisite haiku - love it! Pandita

Linda Jackson

Date: 4/23/2014 2:15:00 PM

I love your Haiku. "Mountains spear the night to day" is perfect. Best wishes Linda

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/20/2014 11:47:00 AM

hi carol love this,,,glad to have seen it,,,

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/13/2014 5:59:00 PM

so nice to hear from you Carol! I hope you & yours are staying warm? I'm snowed in! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2014 9:19:00 PM

hey, carol, have you jumped back on board the soup train? I sure hope so. It was great to get a visit from you today and I await some new poems from you! Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2014 4:51:00 PM

luv you Carol, I can't believe it took you to bring me to the soup for one day. I miss this place. Thank you for the soup mail...Linda tickle tickle tickle

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/1/2014 3:57:00 PM

how did i get from carol to joe maveric and then back to carol? good luck in the contest.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/25/2014 7:14:00 PM

Nice one Carol. Kudos. Kayod5

Funom Makama

Date: 1/24/2014 3:18:00 PM

Nice Haiku. Well written

Margaret Okubo

Date: 1/16/2014 10:17:00 PM

Love this Haiku Carol. Such great imagery. Reminds me of our great creator and his wonderful works. Thanks so much for your kind comments. Hugs.

Maggie Mae Mcafee

Date: 1/16/2014 2:19:00 AM

Hi Carol...beautiful Haiku! Hoping your holidays were joyous and looking forward to hearing from you again..xoxo Maggie Mae

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/4/2014 5:00:00 AM

A lovely poem.

Peter Dome

Date: 12/28/2013 12:48:00 PM

A wonderful write. well done. Pete.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 3:28:00 AM

Carol--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

John Beam

Date: 12/20/2013 10:28:00 PM

I enjoyed and Hope to read more. Have a Merry Christmas