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Haiku 1001

clouds engulf the sky
mountains spear the night to day
sunbursts spew forthwith


Entry to contest sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A
Contest name: Any haiku will do
Written by: Carol Sunshine Brown

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Paghunda Zahid

August 6, 2022 at 11:25 AM

Beautiful imagery.. Blessings

Joseph Spence Sr

July 12, 2022 at 4:08 AM

Excellent creation. I love the imagery. The sight is very vivid. Great job. Blessings always!

Valerie Staton

January 6, 2019 at 9:24 AM

Very nice haiku!

FJ Thomas

April 11, 2018 at 3:35 PM

I'm sorry to have deleted my original account. You'll never know how many times I've checked in on you. I hope you're okay.

M. L. Kiser

July 9, 2017 at 7:26 PM

Yes, I see it; beautifully penned imagery.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

December 27, 2016 at 7:01 AM

Three picturesque lines that paint graphic pictures and then, grab the heart. Nicely written.

Funom Makama

July 22, 2015 at 11:37 AM

this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!

Delli Thami

April 4, 2015 at 3:17 PM

lovely haiku!

Mohammad Taha Effendi

December 27, 2014 at 4:57 AM

Very picturesque and dreamy! Love it:) Taha

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 13, 2014 at 3:24 AM

haiku 1001..great.Interesting..God bless Carol...Love XXXX rajat

Pandita Sietesantos

August 20, 2014 at 1:22 AM

Exquisite haiku - love it! Pandita

Linda Jackson

April 23, 2014 at 2:15 PM

I love your Haiku. "Mountains spear the night to day" is perfect. Best wishes Linda

Harry Horsman

February 20, 2014 at 11:47 AM

hi carol love this,,,glad to have seen it,,,

Debbie Guzzi

February 13, 2014 at 5:59 PM

so nice to hear from you Carol! I hope you & yours are staying warm? I'm snowed in! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2014 at 9:19 PM

hey, carol, have you jumped back on board the soup train? I sure hope so. It was great to get a visit from you today and I await some new poems from you! Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

February 5, 2014 at 4:51 PM

luv you Carol, I can't believe it took you to bring me to the soup for one day. I miss this place. Thank you for the soup mail...Linda tickle tickle tickle

John Loving Iii

February 1, 2014 at 3:57 PM

how did i get from carol to joe maveric and then back to carol? good luck in the contest.

Kayod5 Kayode

January 25, 2014 at 7:14 PM

Nice one Carol. Kudos. Kayod5

Funom Makama

January 24, 2014 at 3:18 PM

Nice Haiku. Well written

Margaret Okubo

January 16, 2014 at 10:17 PM

Love this Haiku Carol. Such great imagery. Reminds me of our great creator and his wonderful works. Thanks so much for your kind comments. Hugs.

Maggie Mae Mcafee

January 16, 2014 at 2:19 AM

Hi Carol...beautiful Haiku! Hoping your holidays were joyous and looking forward to hearing from you again..xoxo Maggie Mae

Vesna Kovrlija

January 4, 2014 at 5:00 AM

A lovely poem.

Peter Dome

December 28, 2013 at 12:48 PM

A wonderful write. well done. Pete.

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2013 at 3:28 AM

Carol--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer