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Haiku 08

a squirrel smells
skunks running a gammit
winds uplifting

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/23/2011 10:55:00 AM

Had me smiling for I hate that skunk smell and it lingers for a long time. I would hightail it for the highest tree. ha ha. love phyl

Paavani Dua

Date: 11/16/2011 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so so much ma'am!! Its very overwhelming to get such lovely comments from you because I have recently turned 15 years and yet I get atleast a bit recognition. Its a great deal for me. Thank you for everything!! Love, Paavani :)

Paavani Dua

Date: 11/15/2011 11:44:00 AM

Hello ma'am! :) thanks alot for featuring my poem "a grandmother"!! also I had not posted a poem for a long time but I JUST did and I wrote it just 2 days back. I really hope you give it a read and tell me how it is...Waiting for your reply :) With love and regards, Paavani

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/15/2011 6:02:00 AM

LOL Good one. (Carol, Thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

Judy Ball

Date: 11/14/2011 5:20:00 PM

WoW! Poor little squirrel. I like skunks though. They really are pretty and sweet but will really make a stink if you scare them. A good write. God Bless, JB

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/14/2011 12:13:00 AM

Now Carol....this is an odoriferous haiku and I love the strong sense of smell you painted. Very fun. My old pet albino skunk named Ben wouldn't take a likin' to this tho. ha ha. Love, Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2011 6:01:00 AM

A beautiful picture u have painted here Carol.Love it.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/13/2011 3:00:00 AM

brilliant Carol, a picture in words. Harry

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/12/2011 6:24:00 PM

smell them "running a gammit" REAL COOL word use! Haiku Royalty with this one! Thanks for all your words of Congrats!:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/10/2011 2:11:00 PM

i wonder if they ever do get sprayed? cats do! light & love

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2011 10:48:00 AM

LOL, eeew! You said you will drop in from time to time to see how we are - you are leaving Soup, Carol? Hope I misunderstood...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/10/2011 9:22:00 AM

I think the tail is lifted too, at least that's what I see. Just great Carol.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/10/2011 8:57:00 AM

I also got the smell,Carol.It is very realistically penned.Thanks for all comments on my poems.luv FAB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2011 5:23:00 PM

haha, this is funny to me. You sure used the sense of smell STRONGLY in this one, sweetie!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2011 2:20:00 PM

Good one..I hope that squirrel escapes that skunk..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/9/2011 12:10:00 PM

Nicely worded uplifting winds. Enjoyed reading of smelling of squirrel. How you find, can you tell me the magic please? Thanks, bl

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/9/2011 11:52:00 AM

Wonderful and free runnig Haiku here Carol, good for all to read:) have really enjoyed this write of yours..!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2011 11:47:00 AM

:) That's very funny, Carol. Alexa Brus had a recent encounter with a skunk, but she managed to avoid getting sprayed by the smell. Love your haiku! Love the poet too, Carolyn

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