Haiku 07

ivy's wet tendrils clinging to the lattice boards... thunder rolls 6/10/12

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/11/2012 11:19:00 AM

Are you dipping into haiku Phyl, you do a rathe super job. Love what sinks into my mind with this. Luv, Lizzie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2012 9:09:00 PM

I really like this haiku. You have been taking lessons!!!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/11/2012 9:54:00 AM

thanks to Deb G she has been helping me out a lot on the proper way to write haiku. We have a group and are trying to learn the right way to do this short form. I cannot seem to withdraw emotionally from what I see.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2012 12:24:00 PM

do not like thunder Phyllis, but I like your poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/10/2012 12:16:00 PM

Another one that is so descriptive of a summer thunder storms..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara