Home » Poems » Phyllis Babcock » Haiku 07

Haiku 07

ivy's wet  tendrils
clinging to the lattice boards...
thunder rolls

6/10/12

naturehaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Elizabeth Wesley

June 11, 2012 at 11:19 AM

Are you dipping into haiku Phyl, you do a rathe super job. Love what sinks into my mind with this. Luv, Lizzie

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2012 at 9:09 PM

I really like this haiku. You have been taking lessons!!!

Phyllis Babcock

June 11, 2012 at 9:54 AM

thanks to Deb G she has been helping me out a lot on the proper way to write haiku. We have a group and are trying to learn the right way to do this short form. I cannot seem to withdraw emotionally from what I see.