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Haiku 07

wind blasts trees
 naked as newborn birds...
snowflakes cascading 



5th Place Winner
Any New or Old Haiku Will Do
Contest by Sidney~LeeAnn

natureseasonshaiku

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Dillon Lewis

January 27, 2012 at 8:24 PM

i enjoy these, very nice

Robert A. Dufresne

November 23, 2011 at 4:36 PM

another fine win to congratulate you for Carol ..Happy thanks giving to you and yoursl

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 22, 2011 at 11:41 AM

Thank you to everyone. Love, Carol

Fabiyas M V

November 20, 2011 at 8:34 AM

Marvelous! Congratulations on your 5th place win!Thank you for all comments on my poem,Carol.Lovingly,FABIYAS

Bl Devnath

November 20, 2011 at 5:08 AM

Congrats you for your nice win. Thanks, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 20, 2011 at 2:40 AM

Congrats on your win x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2011 at 8:52 PM

Congrats Carol on a stunning win for excellent poetry my friend..luv..

David Williams

November 19, 2011 at 11:39 AM

Carol congrats on your win, great use of imagery..many thanks for your ever appreciated comments..David

Onyebuchi Okonkwo

November 19, 2011 at 11:04 AM

smooth imagery.congrats Carol...O.O.

Andrea Dietrich

November 19, 2011 at 8:15 AM

CArol, this was truly one of the best of them all. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 19, 2011 at 6:54 AM

Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem, Carol

Skat A

November 18, 2011 at 11:59 PM

C.B., Congrats in my contest~SID

Andrea Dietrich

November 16, 2011 at 11:27 PM

wow, now here is a really nice one that I missed. I think you are getting quite good at these, CArol!

Jack Horne

November 16, 2011 at 12:44 PM

Lovely haiku. Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend : )

John Freeman

November 16, 2011 at 12:05 PM

Vivid picture here Carol, great job lady. Agape, Moses

David William Breidenthal

November 14, 2011 at 9:57 PM

Beautiful! :) Grrreat poem! *rawr*DWB

Elizabeth Wesley

November 10, 2011 at 9:20 AM

I think rules are made to be broken for this gives satisfaction to read!

Debbie Guzzi

November 9, 2011 at 6:15 PM

you need a different line 2 which is not a metaphor...no poetic vehicles such as simile metaphor or personification are used in haiku except occasionally alliteration...

David William Breidenthal

November 14, 2011 at 9:58 PM

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 10, 2011 at 5:00 AM

As it is your contest and you want it a certain way I will remove this from your contest. I can not write what does not make sense to me. If I did it would be your poem not mine. Thank you. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

November 9, 2011 at 10:48 AM

I have to say that this poem is a better version of Haiku 06! You did an awesome job of the other Haiku, and this one is better than that one! Congratulations of a job very well done!!

Sarah Seraphin

November 9, 2011 at 10:43 AM

* “I Love The Image of Snowflakes Cascading * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Yet for Reason I Was Left Perhaps With A Slight Concern for That Baby Bird *.* Hopefully It Was Not Their Fluffy Precious Innocent Feathers * Floating Through The Blast, of Wind *.* Very Sweet My Dear * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *