Haiku 05

snow on lawn robin's arrive hungry frozen dinner

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/10/2024 2:22:00 PM

Good one. Those poor robins having to eat a frozen TV dinner. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2012 9:22:00 AM

Phyllis , congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Best wishes to you and everyone around you this Mothers Day, God Bless~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2012 6:49:00 AM

phyllis, just rereading this one. It's so funny. Why don't you enter it in that Ku Ku contest. I think tracies? Well, I am flying thru my comments that have piled up since Joe got home a few days ago. Was up with insomina since 3 a.m and still not quite finished here. I had lots of hotmail to get to as well. HOpe you have a great weekend. Luv, Andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2012 12:59:00 PM

Funny one Phyllis......love it. - oxox Anne-Lise - Hope you had a nice Easter.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2012 11:07:00 PM

haha, I like that frozen dinner at the end!! You don't need ' in robins! Thanks for your update in soupmail. You are the greatest.