Haiku 05

snow on  lawn
robin's arrive hungry
frozen dinner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Good one. Those poor robins having to eat a frozen TV dinner. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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May 13, 2012 at 9:22 AM
Phyllis , congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Best wishes to you and everyone around you this Mothers Day, God Bless~PD
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 6:49 AM
phyllis, just rereading this one. It's so funny. Why don't you enter it in that Ku Ku contest. I think tracies? Well, I am flying thru my comments that have piled up since Joe got home a few days ago. Was up with insomina since 3 a.m and still not quite finished here. I had lots of hotmail to get to as well. HOpe you have a great weekend. Luv, Andrea
Andresen Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Funny one Phyllis......love it. - oxox Anne-Lise - Hope you had a nice Easter.
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 11:07 PM
haha, I like that frozen dinner at the end!! You don't need ' in robins! Thanks for your update in soupmail. You are the greatest.
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