Haiku 0424

hay fever green scent of fresh grass first cut
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 2:58 PM
Good effect here. I think of the almost rotting smell of cut grass on a hot summer day. Love, daverpard
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April 24, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Well done...... good !!! - oxox Anne-Lise
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