Haiku 02

jellyfish floating
in turbulent sea currents
beware tentacles

sting ray flapping by
vast oceans you do cross
in your endless quest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Very descriptive work..I got stung by a jelly and this brings vivid images to mind..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 12:29 PM
ouch very painful Sara ty for reading Shadow x smile hug
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