Haiku 005

on the stove
the kettle hisses then whistles -
goodbye yesterday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Excellent haiku with great imagery! Love it! Pandita
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May 28, 2015 at 1:27 AM
Thank you so much for reading.
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