Haiku 005

on the stove
the kettle hisses then whistles -
goodbye yesterday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/24/2014 8:49:00 AM
Excellent haiku with great imagery! Love it! Pandita
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Olufunke Kolapo
Date: 5/28/2015 1:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading.
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