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trees rooted deeply now in soil moistened by rain their thirst quenched at last

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Date: 11/17/2019 3:54:00 PM
I haven't done a lot of walking in a few days as it's been so cold here! I'm needing to go out and walk a bit.
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Rituko Shindo
Date: 11/19/2019 8:00:00 AM
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Date: 11/17/2019 6:07:00 AM
Unfortunately, that's right.I haven't taken a walk for the last few days. I made some worksheets for my students on my computer.I have lost sight of life with nature.
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:10:00 PM
Ritsuko, yes this is true:) I do always think about how much people miss. It's more of a concern than ever with their phones always in front of them, people notice less and less!!
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:03:00 PM
People who write poetry are deeply focused on what people usually miss. I forget about the roots in the soil when I see flowers and leaves on the ground. Yes, there are roots that are craving. It may be also true for humans.
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