Haiku3

trees rooted deeply
now in soil moistened by rain
their thirst quenched at last
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November 17, 2019 at 3:54 PM
I haven't done a lot of walking in a few days as it's been so cold here! I'm needing to go out and walk a bit.
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November 19, 2019 at 8:00 AM
(^^)
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November 17, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Unfortunately, that's right.I haven't taken a walk for the last few days. I made some worksheets for my students on my computer.I have lost sight of life with nature.
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October 23, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Ritsuko, yes this is true:) I do always think about how much people miss. It's more of a concern than ever with their phones always in front of them, people notice less and less!!
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October 23, 2019 at 4:03 PM
People who write poetry are deeply focused on what people usually miss. I forget about the roots in the soil when I see flowers and leaves on the ground. Yes, there are roots that are craving. It may be also true for humans.
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