Haiku2

Weather pattern stalls
it suffers from inertia
no blue penetrates

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Carol Fillmore

November 17, 2019 at 3:50 PM

Ritsuko, the poem is about the weather being cloudy for many days in a row. I hadn't seen blue sky in a long time and it was getting on my nerves!

Rituko Shindo

November 19, 2019 at 7:56 AM

I was trying to find something philosophical in this poem. I should have seen nature with my natural eyes,right?

Rituko Shindo

November 17, 2019 at 6:22 AM

This poem is difficult for me.Maybe it's because of my lack of vocabulary. I understand the meaning of each word, but it doesn't appear in my head as a photo. Tell me more about the background of this poem when you have time.

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