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wind swishes the leaves
spring green shimmies and shakes
nature's belly dance
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November 17, 2019 at 3:47 PM
The breeze can really make the trees shimmy and shake at times. It's not always so warm in my country in the spring! The leaves may be dancing to keep warm lol
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November 19, 2019 at 7:52 AM
I see. I felt the season in my own way. I felt that spring was the beginning of the passion season for summer.
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November 17, 2019 at 6:41 AM
I have a calm and warm image in spring, but There are strong breath of lives and joy of lives there. Tree leaves are pretty but they are passionately dancing belly dance. So lovely poem.
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