Haiku1

no moon shines tonight
rain slicked pavement gleams under
the street light nearby
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Laan Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 2:51 AM
beautiful images
Mannan Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 1:32 AM
Such a viual treat.
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:56 PM
soupmail
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Carol and I thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Visual and expressive Carol.. appreciate your encouraging comment for my contest entry.. for Dr. Ram... he truly does challenge our creativity ..happy weekend with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Nice haiku with nice images, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 3:11 AM
ravishing thoughts, carol.. i like! warmest, nette
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:23 PM
Streetlight can make some pretty cool patterns! Hey, CArol, were you, by chance, speaking of the magnet poetry at Shadowpoetry.com?. I know they used to have it there alot!
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