Haiku1

no moon shines tonight rain slicked pavement gleams under the street light nearby

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Eiken Laan

Date: 12/29/2010 2:51:00 AM

beautiful images

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/4/2010 1:32:00 AM

Such a viual treat.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2010 8:56:00 PM

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/3/2010 10:46:00 AM

Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Carol and I thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/3/2010 8:32:00 AM

Visual and expressive Carol.. appreciate your encouraging comment for my contest entry.. for Dr. Ram... he truly does challenge our creativity ..happy weekend with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/3/2010 8:27:00 AM

Nice haiku with nice images, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2010 3:11:00 AM

ravishing thoughts, carol.. i like! warmest, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2010 8:23:00 PM

Streetlight can make some pretty cool patterns! Hey, CArol, were you, by chance, speaking of the magnet poetry at Shadowpoetry.com?. I know they used to have it there alot!