HAIGA the VERTICAL HIKU

ART&POETRY combined
My example in hotspot link as  a TRISTCH HIKU 

footsteps
   in the streets -
echos of distant youth

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Jacqueline R. Mendoza

June 3, 2025 at 9:59 PM

Hello it's Jac. I think ur poem is nice, it's Haiku alright but I don't quite follow the 7-5-7 syllables, as long as I have 3 lines then I call it Haiku. Is that bad for me to do? I invite u to my poetrysoup hp and comment on some. To inform u, I accept Constructive Criticism because I'm not perfect n it's for the best version of myself.

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