Haiga

bareback on a beach
my mare and I out of reach
   sea spray on my feet

16/01/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:13 PM
back with my Congrats!!
Murray Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:13 PM
REALLY love this one Jean:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 1:05 AM
Thank you Jan. I do love to be beside the seaside.
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Jean, love the imagery it's fabulous... eve
Murray Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:47 PM
You are fabulous for saying so Eve. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:37 AM
- Congratulations on your great 3rd place in the contest, Jean :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Same to you Sunshine.
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Lovely, Jean. Congrats on your podium finish.
Murray Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 12:47 AM
I'm pleased as Punch Line. Thank you.
Callus Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 8:31 AM
What a lovely picture you project, Jean! Congrats on your fine win! Regards // paul
Murray Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 1:11 AM
Thank you Paul.
James Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 12:44 AM
Lovely write! Paints a picture!
Murray Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 1:14 AM
Jump on James! Gust grab my arm and pull. Like in the westerns.
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Love this!!
Murray Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 1:12 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Pett Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Really like this Jean, creates lovely images.
Murray Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 9:47 AM
Thank you Roy. I had deleted it by mistake and had to repost it.
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