Hagard Distaste

A thousand years pass
In the blink of an eye
An alchohol drenched sky
Bring a lighter and set it ablaze
Rancid cigarettes
Gruesome hangovers
Things you do and then forget 
People you meet that you regret
Just one more, and I'm done 
Next thing you know, you wake up alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 27, 2010 at 7:39 PM
Me again gorgeous writing
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November 27, 2010 at 7:38 PM
""Uhhaaa!" Wow... ." "Gorgeous writing, awesome lesson... just-gorgeous writing... !""
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November 23, 2010 at 1:14 PM
An alchohol drenched sky quite interesting expression, Priscilla
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November 22, 2010 at 9:13 PM
something sour and serene with its honesty
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