Had You Said Yes

When I went down on my knee
And asked you my wife to be,
You said you wanted to think about it
Maybe just for a day you'll sleep on it.

20 torturous years have passed since
Yet to my hopeful heart I couldn't convince
That spurning me you went on to marry
A man of wealth, comfort and less worry.

You went ahead since and married twice,
Though passing years have made me wise
My foolish heart as always still pines for you--
But I wonder, did you ever feel guilty or rue?

Whatever happened was for the best,
Maybe fate had a game-plan or a test,
Never in your share is given more or less
What would my life be had you said 'Yes'?

Maybe a divorcé or stone-cold dead
For you to go ahead and again wed,
Destined to marry thrice and not less
You spared my life by not saying YES!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 11:34 AM
You captivated me with this sad poem Abdul but I was so happy when I read the last line to see you understood she didn't deserve you. Congratulations on your win
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:49 AM
- Abdul, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:26 AM
Enjoyed a very nice story, congrats on the win, Abdul
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Excellent story, deep when you consider it. Congratulations on your win.
Mandani Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Deep, indeed, it is...that's why I am still alive! Thanks for comments.
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Thank You for entering my contest!
Mandani Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 3:20 PM
No, thank YOU for choosing my poem.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:13 AM
sad but humourous write Abdul - I love the twist at the end:-) many congrats on your fine win:-) hugs jan xx
Mandani Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Thanks a lot!
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