Had Me At Hello

Even though you live so far away,
There are a million things I wish I could say,
But the feelings are so strong, I cannot verbalise,
And all I long for, is too look into your eyes,
You really did, Have me at hello, 
My feelings for you, They are stronger than mellow,
They are bright and colourful, and light up the sky,
Nothing will come between us, It’s just you and I,
They could travel the world, If only they had feet,
And that means, that one day, we really shall meet,
And I’ll lie in your arms, like the way it’s supposed too be, 
Because I would really give anything for you too see,
How much I need you in my life,
Because it’s you and only you that takes away the strife,
You really are what causes my inner peace,
And without you, I really would decease,
Because you are my everything, without you I could not breathe,
So please, I’m not gonna let go, So never leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/6/2011 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Chalaina. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:34:00 PM
Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. www.poeticvoice.ning.com We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!
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Date: 4/4/2011 4:48:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chalaina. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors what ever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 9:10:00 AM
So beautiful, and heartfelt! Terrific!
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:19:00 AM
I like it.....thanks
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