Ann Gilmour Poet Haiku

H2o Life Or Death

soft rain revives like

              liquid gold  but tsunami 

                                    annihilates life



5/7/5 syllables
Written 12th June 2019
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Contest Name: MagiCicada 13 or 17 
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy

24 May 2020
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Sponsor Brian Strand 
2nd PLACE

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Jennifer Proxenos June 16, 2019 at 10:27 AM Never a truer word spoken, a poem with a heartfelt message Ann, Well penned! Hugs, Jennifer. Ann Gilmour June 17, 2019 at 2:28 AM Many thanks Jennifer and so glad you liked it. I really appreciate your comments and lovely visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios June 13, 2019 at 10:57 AM Fabulous Haiku Ann! I think you have a pen from heaven. Panagiota Ann Gilmour June 13, 2019 at 4:22 PM Bless you Panagiota, so pleased you enjoyed my Haiku. Wow 'pen from heaven' what a wonderful compliment you pay me dear friend - thank you so much. My middle name is Patricia, so with kindest thoughts from Ann Patricia to dear Panagiota Ann xx

Tom Cunningham June 12, 2019 at 12:13 PM Well written Ann, I often think of that big one a few years back that claimed thousands of lives. Good luck. Tom. Ann Gilmour June 12, 2019 at 12:21 PM Yes that was such a terrible tsunami Tom, and happened without any warning, those poor people had no chance - very scary! Thanks for your welcome visit Tom, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison June 12, 2019 at 12:02 PM too little or too much can cause havoc we need a perfect balance Ann - super haiku:-) hugs jan xx Ann Gilmour June 12, 2019 at 12:17 PM Thank you Jan, that is so true. I hope your hubby is coming to the end of his treatment and that it has been a success. Good luck to you both, with kindest thoughts Ann xx