Home » Poems » Ann Gilmour » H2o Life Or Death

H2o Life Or Death

soft rain revives like liquid gold but tsunami annihilates life 5/7/5 syllables Written 12th June 2019 Premier Contest Name: MagiCicada 13 or 17 Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy 24 May 2020 Contest Brian's Choice T Sponsor Brian Strand 2nd PLACE

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/16/2019 10:27:00 AM

Never a truer word spoken, a poem with a heartfelt message Ann, Well penned! Hugs, Jennifer.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/17/2019 2:28:00 AM

Many thanks Jennifer and so glad you liked it. I really appreciate your comments and lovely visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/13/2019 10:57:00 AM

Fabulous Haiku Ann! I think you have a pen from heaven. Panagiota

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/13/2019 4:22:00 PM

Bless you Panagiota, so pleased you enjoyed my Haiku. Wow 'pen from heaven' what a wonderful compliment you pay me dear friend - thank you so much. My middle name is Patricia, so with kindest thoughts from Ann Patricia to dear Panagiota Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/12/2019 12:13:00 PM

Well written Ann, I often think of that big one a few years back that claimed thousands of lives. Good luck. Tom.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/12/2019 12:21:00 PM

Yes that was such a terrible tsunami Tom, and happened without any warning, those poor people had no chance - very scary! Thanks for your welcome visit Tom, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2019 12:02:00 PM

too little or too much can cause havoc we need a perfect balance Ann - super haiku:-) hugs jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/12/2019 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Jan, that is so true. I hope your hubby is coming to the end of his treatment and that it has been a success. Good luck to you both, with kindest thoughts Ann xx