Gyrating

The woman
gyrating in the club,
my husband’s lap.

January 20, 2014
Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: 1 senryu on anything except love 
Sponsored by Black Eyed Susan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/26/2014 8:52:00 PM
lovely win Dane....SKAT
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Date: 2/21/2014 12:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dane
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Date: 2/21/2014 11:33:00 AM
congrats on win hugs
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Date: 2/21/2014 10:04:00 AM
Way to go..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2014 10:19:00 PM
and I figured it was fiction Sadly, I think mine on this list is not fiction.
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Date: 2/20/2014 10:18:00 PM
loved it loved it!! Congrats, dearie.
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Date: 2/20/2014 7:31:00 PM
Good one Dane. Congratulations on your win. Connie
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Date: 1/21/2014 6:49:00 PM
hahaha, I do believe this one is right up Susan's alley!! Sure hope so. I love it.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/22/2014 7:02:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Glad you got a laugh out of it. (So did I, since it's fiction! lol)
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