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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Gyrating

The woman
gyrating in the club,
my husband’s lap.

January 20, 2014
Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: 1 senryu on anything except love 
Sponsored by Black Eyed Susan

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen | Year Posted 2014

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February 26, 2014 at 8:52 PM

lovely win Dane....SKAT

February 21, 2014 at 12:29 PM

Congrats on your win Dane

Shadow Hamilton

February 21, 2014 at 11:33 AM

congrats on win hugs

February 21, 2014 at 10:04 AM

Way to go..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2014 at 10:19 PM

and I figured it was fiction Sadly, I think mine on this list is not fiction.

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2014 at 10:18 PM

loved it loved it!! Congrats, dearie.

Connie Gildersleeve

February 20, 2014 at 7:31 PM

Good one Dane. Congratulations on your win. Connie

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2014 at 6:49 PM

hahaha, I do believe this one is right up Susan's alley!! Sure hope so. I love it.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 22, 2014 at 7:02 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Glad you got a laugh out of it. (So did I, since it's fiction! lol)

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