Gyrating

The woman gyrating in the club, my husband’s lap. January 20, 2014 Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: 1 senryu on anything except love Sponsored by Black Eyed Susan

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2014 8:52:00 PM

lovely win Dane....SKAT

Joseph May

Date: 2/21/2014 12:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win Dane

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2014 11:33:00 AM

congrats on win hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2014 10:04:00 AM

Way to go..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2014 10:19:00 PM

and I figured it was fiction Sadly, I think mine on this list is not fiction.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2014 10:18:00 PM

loved it loved it!! Congrats, dearie.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/20/2014 7:31:00 PM

Good one Dane. Congratulations on your win. Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2014 6:49:00 PM

hahaha, I do believe this one is right up Susan's alley!! Sure hope so. I love it.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/22/2014 7:02:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Glad you got a laugh out of it. (So did I, since it's fiction! lol)