Guys Take It Easy This Is My First Kyrielle

Along came a fire and I sat
Down beside her, the Earth's lava.
I move like a mule and a cat.
Not ever a care or botha.'

Wives and kids and money to be made.
Spinning dishes on poles evermore.
I stand a-muck with heart dismayed.
My compass smashed and far from shore.

I sit here now writing this poem.
Kyrielle? Why not? What the hell? 
Just two lines left in this flotsam.
Geez, I typed this slow as a snell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 3, 2023 at 5:04 AM
You did the form very well
Caliri Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Thanks!!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 7:04 AM
a fun and funny poem, Matt. Glad you liked my Ku.
Empress Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Those last lines made me chuckle! How real is this, what we all really go think when we try new forms. And i love the rhymes there especially! Creative.
Caliri Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 9:42 PM
Thanks, Empress!!! I try to end on a fun note.
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