Notes About The Poem

6 Nov 2025, for POETRY IS IN THE HOUSE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

sheep sorted

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Gutter

A torrent of words pounds
on roof of mind inclined
to shed them out of bounds,
aligning them to file,
like sheep through sorting gates,
to ripple poem's sounds.
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Anderson Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Thanks very much for the feedback. All the Best! Cheers
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Very unique take on the topic. Well done and congrats on the win
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