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Gunslinger

With a sneer and a s.... His hand on the trigger The little boy cocked his gun His friends ran away Cos' they would not play With a boy that was no fun Note... Laugh in a half-suppressed and typically scornful way Snicker in American Sn....... in English as in all dictionaries with no offensive connotations whatsoever. I find the exclusion of the rest of the word in my poem out of my comprehension.

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Date: 3/30/2021 6:16:00 AM
Yes that makes no sense because you were able to write it in your commentary. I would go back to edit your poem delete the word retype it and re-save your poem.
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