Guns

What a drag they are
Pressure rises until death
Sleep peacefully now
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Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
Monteblanco Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:41 PM
congrats on your win, John.
Monteblanco Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Thank you
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Congrats on the win!!
Monteblanco Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Thank you!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 John xx
Monteblanco Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:21 PM
And many thanks to you
Song Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 9:07 PM
Great emotion expressed in this entry, John...Thanks for taking time out for my contest and creating a strong haiku. It is powerful! gwendolen
Monteblanco Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:20 PM
Thank you for the recognition
A   Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 9:06 PM
John, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
A   Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Nice to see you here John,,,, it's been a long time... about your haiku..... guns are bad,, and can kill the best of us.... always~LINDA
Monteblanco Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Thanks, it's good to be back!
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