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Gun In Hand

Bitter hardened steel of death Warm soft tissue fed by breath From the breath steel comes to life From cold steel a breathless wife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/26/2013 4:32:00 PM
WOW, yours is dang good!!!! Congrats, Chris.
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win!Love your couplets.
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:25:00 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Chris xx
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:01:00 PM
Chris, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2013 8:05:00 PM
Chris! This is superb writing with its succinct message! Please refer to my lil blog! Appreciated this outstanding entry! Sincerest regards, gwendolen
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Date: 1/18/2013 1:56:00 PM
I see you now have the Poetry bug. It can be intoxicating.
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Chris Damstrom
Date: 1/18/2013 2:36:00 PM
Yes.. Yes I do..
Date: 1/18/2013 11:32:00 AM
thnx... no need to worry .. I would defend my wife
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Date: 1/18/2013 11:23:00 AM
i like it but a bit worrisome... -izzy
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