Gum

I am gum. . . . . Chew all you want I will never be digested never yield. . . . . stop trying. to understand. to digest. . . . . you’re making me lose my flavor.

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Nimajneb Nart

Date: 4/30/2012 10:53:00 PM

You lost flavor before the wrapper was taken off. xD Hahaha.

Your Personal Troll
Date: 5/3/2012 10:18:00 PM

You can only kick trash 5 times... 8D

Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/30/2012 9:24:00 PM

Cute I will be looking to see what you do next. TLee

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2012 9:02:00 PM

Ryan, welcome to the poetry soup.. and a big LOL~ to your first poem posted here. Now tell me how to get you oit of my hair. (JK) By the way, I can only stand gum for 2 minutes. Once it loses it's flavor I toss it out not swallow it. (okay maybe when i was little) I wonder how many piece of gums I have stuck on my stomach walls...lol.. never knew gum could not be digested.. a very interesting and fun poem.. Now go and post another poem* one poem is not enough. .. enjoyed your poem, take care~ ALWAYS ~ xox ~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/30/2012 9:03:00 PM

sorry typo... that is "OUT!" not oit... thank you