Guided

She awoke suddenly in the midst of cold night
Startled from visions still held within sight
God rest near her bedside surrounded by light
Holding out a hand to navigate her end flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 26, 2015 at 5:20 PM
well said
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March 16, 2014 at 2:49 PM
This sent chills down my spine. Somehow the last line breaks the rhythm.
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