Guess Who's Back, Offence and Pain Aint Two of the Same

Who'd have thought words make them react like this,
failing to see my wit, just the unattractiveness.
An eye for crudeness that'll overpower the humorous.
I'm sure within their brain a tumour lives.

Has your face ever felt the force of a fist?
It'll twist your perception like a contortionist,
because offence and pain aint two of the same.
One requires staples so that the blood's contained,
the other's just a thought you'd rather not maintain.
I get that neither are a source used to entertain,
but at the end of the day crudeness aint pain.

Offence is just a nuisance you choose to refuse,
it aint a scar, a cut or a bruise.
Scars are something you can never remove,
but when I got mine I made jokes that amused.
So can you help me now please and give me some clues,
when I'd been hit by a knuckle duster I was less confused.
Do you really feel pain when I'm crude and rude?

Please explain how words upset and leave you offended.
How does it feel and how do you end it?
Is it just simple natural sounds that you can't stand?
Compare that to soldiers losing limbs and can't stand.
If this is you I've just one thing to say my friend,
your life is easy if words drive you around the bend.

POTD
5/7/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/26/2018 9:01:00 AM
Exceptional poetry from a true and gifted poet! A fav, a shining gem...
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/25/2018 8:51:00 AM
thanks Robert, sorry for the delayed reply, I don't receive notifications lol
Date: 7/14/2018 2:44:00 PM
Late congratulations on POTD!! This is so true! Only self-centered people expect the whole world to change for them when they perceive offense. There is also a difference between offense and not following rules. I like this, well written. A fave!
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Nick Trim
Date: 7/18/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Susan sorry about the late reply been rushed off my feet recently.... and yeah I admit I did break the rules lol
Date: 7/12/2018 9:01:00 AM
Hey Nick, a belated congrats on Poem of the day.
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:05:00 AM
thanks Richard, my old account was removed and all my poems deleted so this was a comeback piece, I was glad it won poem of the day on my first day back lol i'll be toning it down from now on, my cruder poems get posted to a separate site now lol
Date: 7/5/2018 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:18:00 PM
it's about wild reaction from people offended by a word they don't like and the discomfort it causes, and i'm saying that that sort of offence isnt something that should cause discomfort, and if it does it is not discomfort like physical pain is, what you would feel is pain from your tumour getting upset by a word is not pain.
Date: 7/5/2018 5:19:00 PM
This poem is based on reading material not verbal use/abuse, the two are very different
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:05:00 PM
heard mate - especially relate to the last line - go well- glad I checked potd - thanks - love always - V. Although can't resist saying my husband used words to emotional torture me around the bend - however your line is true - I didn't turn that corner! finally escaped and best revenge is to live amazingly ever after =
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Nick Trim
Date: 7/5/2018 5:11:00 PM
poor you that sounds horrible, i'm glad you got away from that, that last line or the whole poem in fact is actually intended to mean the odd swear or crude word within a read, not some d-head verbally abusing because that's totally different
Date: 7/5/2018 3:32:00 PM
Excellent write Nick...well deserved POTD...so true...too many people out there need to pull up their self esteem and get over it...there are worse things...
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Nick Trim
Date: 7/5/2018 5:12:00 PM
thank you very much Chris
Date: 7/5/2018 12:59:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Nick - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, it's good to be back
Date: 7/5/2018 10:47:00 AM
Words of wisdom... Well expressed and filled with common sense ... Congrats ... All the best nick...
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Arturo, much appreciated
Date: 7/5/2018 9:48:00 AM
Wittingly crafted my friend...Congrats!!! on your POTD! Nick...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you WW, my account was deleted sand this my comeback piece, i'm glad it did well :)
Date: 7/5/2018 8:09:00 AM
this is beautiful. please read my poem I need feedback https://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=105249
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Thomo, i'll check your one out
Date: 7/5/2018 6:40:00 AM
Nick, for sure I can see your wit with this one! Congratulations on your POTD...All the best...Charlie
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Charles :)
Date: 7/5/2018 6:24:00 AM
I absolutely love reading this magnificent poem od yours, everything about it was perfect, the flow, the message and the rhyme, many congratulations on your poem being chose as POTD, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, Faraz much appreciated :)
Date: 7/4/2018 1:12:00 AM
Hi Nick.. Back from a party and wide awake. Need me a few funny, mysterious, interesting, or mellow writes to settle me into a restful state. So glad I came across your poem tonight.. just what I needed!
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Date: 7/4/2018 10:58:00 AM
you're welcome
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