Angie Thomas Poet Rhyme

Guardian Angel

As these pearly dew drops fall, 
I realize I can't hide anymore.
As I try to stand tall
I realize that I just can't stand no more.

Then, like a guardian angel, you came to me,
Told me to live, live to see another day.
You swept me off my feet,
You took my breath away.

Just as I thought I'd be happy,
You turned out to be just a fake.
You made me feel kinda crappy,
Loving you... Was my worst mistake

  
I did fall,
That's what you did to me
 But then, I stood tall...
I fell... On my feet...

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Steven Henderson October 23, 2016 at 8:34 AM Angie my dear, never retreat, is my way to greet! Peace and many blessings to you and all of yours. Angie Thomas October 23, 2016 at 9:13 AM Thank you Steven for the kind words :)

Paul Callus April 5, 2014 at 9:02 AM Hey Angie! sorry for meeting with the wrong guardian angel...but remember there are the good ones as well :) ...and by the way...don't take it out on yourself :) // paul Paul Callus April 5, 2014 at 9:54 AM ...oh...I see no problems with avatar :) Angie Thomas April 5, 2014 at 9:40 AM Thanks Paul, no I'm not gonna take it out on myself, except by eating cake and getting fat...but, I still have hope I'm gonna meet one of the good ones soon enough... :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2014 at 8:34 AM - A poem that began so beautiful ............. lol .... your cake sins in the end - Pleased to read ..... gave me a smile - I wish you a great weekend , Angie! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Angie Thomas April 5, 2014 at 9:41 AM LOL Anne-Lise, the cake part was to add a touch of humour, and also to make the poem rhyme I admit... :P but thanks for your kind words. :)