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Credit to Writing Muse! Thanks!!

Running around frantically, The wrong lock for a key, Boiling over, fuming, Cleanness always looming. Lurking over, smiling ear to ear, Small, always wanting to steer, “Too controlling!”, spoilt I’d say, Always wanting their way. It’s like their hearts are astray, In one spot, you can’t stay, Oh, how I’d love to keep them quiet, Pitter, patter, follow it. Fighting, battling in a “war”, Toothpicks drawn over an apple core, How silly we were as children, making food sculptures, Fighting over scraps like vultures. Contagious, maturity spreading fast, Cough, breath, that’s my last, Punch to the face, youth ending soon, Lies spread by a goon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/25/2023 2:52:00 PM
Who's the goon? Nevermind. Welcome to PS fire bird
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Date: 9/25/2023 2:55:00 PM
Hi Tom, thanks for the welcome and the comment! The Goon is a certain person in our class I guess... - Phoenix :)
Date: 9/24/2023 11:28:00 PM
again, so enjoyable creating this with you! i love how each individual line develops into a story and has its own meaning growing itself
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Date: 9/24/2023 11:29:00 PM
Same, I hope we can continue to write poems like this together!! - Phoenix :)

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