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Grownup Ideals

Sometimes it becomes painfully obvious
love is but a silly childish fantasy
~ we must redefine the dream


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 4:25 PM
I share your thought sometimes. Fantasies, though, must grow up and face reality.
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:41 PM
there are no simple instructions...
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