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Sometimes it becomes painfully obvious
love is but a silly childish fantasy
~ we must redefine the dream


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/21/2025 4:25:00 PM
I share your thought sometimes. Fantasies, though, must grow up and face reality.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2025 6:41:00 PM
there are no simple instructions...

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