Growing Up

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Written: November 07, 2023, For Robert James Liguori Contest __________________________________________ Felicity In the flamboyant form of yesteryear. Where giggles pranced and frightened fear. I yearn to revert to those idyllic, carefree days. As we swung in the blazing sunlight, rays Oh, the town pool, our hot-season delight. By such lofty slides, our zeal soared to blight. Joyfully shrieking as we swam into the water. Putting dear stories to ride us as marauders An enchanted event: the regional fair. Walking in tandem and flying by the air. Puffy white haze with a swirl of vivid shade Riding provided us with an unending glade. As trends glide to the wide sky's demesne In saffron light, a tale of growing up in a den Lacking worldly care, we wander afar and wide. Dispelling frets, embracing one's fremd side. As if a few seeds were buried in the ground. We start our trek by pursuing our pound. We roam the earth with wonder as our guide. Rising to our dreams and acquiring their pride A fascinating game, Ghost in the Graveyard frenetic scurrying, hiding, and yelling pards. We frolic under the moon watchful gaze. Until dawn, I was lost in the gloomy phase. The sole dollar I got on my card was fabulous. Heaps to buy a huge box of dime candy pabulous. Oh, how I'd scramble there, swiftly, then quick. desperate craving for every single caramel stick. But as the years went by, I began to realize, Indulging in sweets came with a price. The licorice and chocolate, once my delight, Now haunted my health, day and night. Every action is a learning experience. Whipping tight modus and feeling delirious From injuries, both physical and emotional. Every role imparts wisdom and is devotional.

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Date: 11/10/2023 4:13:00 AM
You are one of the master poets. This too is a masterly work. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/8/2023 6:00:00 AM
Wonderfully reminiscing in sweet memories, my friend. Every detail yearns for the days beloved. Splendid lookback to yore.
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Date: 11/8/2023 1:13:00 AM
Wow! Awesome and amazing write, Lasaad. The smiles a single dollar can bring to a child's face. Back in the day a quarter would have done the same. Best of luck in the contest with this brilliant write. Charlie
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:21:00 AM
You really are a rhymester! Who would have thought of rhymes like pabulous? So unique and creative! I absolutely love this poem , shows how one reminisces about childhood and good old days; and how growing up has been, its like a movie that unfolds, as i read your poetic word weaving! I love the imagery, alliterations and depth of your lines! Especially the opening was so captivating for me! Definitely this is one of the best ive read for this theme! Im sure you will do well! Goodluck! Amazing
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