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Growing Up

GROWING UP At the beginning, I was a baby No mind to speak of, just need Growing quickly into a toddler Ancestral genes the modeller Too young to follow a creed Destined for greatness - maybe A tall young boy, learning fast Changes in both body and brain Things one can do, stuff one can’t Life suggesting a different slant Examinations come round again Until it’s leaving school at last The world of work offers surety Self-sufficient, now living alone Many new challenging decisions Interviews for better positions Conducted on a mobile phone Balancing interests with security After decades of payslips and tax Marriage, and even having kids Retirement looms in a few years More free time and no more tears Hoping health is not on the skids Faced with a different set of facts Less about future, more of the past One’s life was a million adventures Now everything is at a slower pace Often caught staring up into space Getting used to wearing dentures And accepting that the die is cast

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Date: 11/10/2023 3:57:00 AM
"Less about future, more of the past One’s life was a million adventures" - A grand solemn writing based on self. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2023 3:48:00 PM
Outstanding rhyme scheme, Howard. You've described the 'cycle of life' quite well. You're right...the last stanza is a pivotal point...I'm transcending through it now....the slower pace but still have teeth and a presence of mind (thankfully) Liked your poem tremendously. Have a great evening, Sara
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Howard Osborne
Date: 11/10/2023 12:36:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comments on this and my other poems. I like yours too. Take care.

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