Growing Thoughts

You try so hard to make sense of it and write,
But deep within on comes no light,
You find it difficult to push out your thought,
You want to but by no one it will be bought,
So now it slips away far behind,
To add to the endless pile in the back of your mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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December 18, 2011 at 1:37 PM
I'm probably annoying everyone cause I comment on literally everything today.. But you know just how I feel! All these thoughts piling into the back of your head and you finally just have to let them out... Great poem, perfectly clear what you're trying to say and I love when poems are fully understandable :) Love, J.
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