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Growing Older

Trouble
                                   Scary, Fun
                          Running, Slipping, Falling
                  Magnetic, Frenzied, Smooth, Glassy
                         Breathing, Smiling Laughing
                                 Restful, Calm
                                        Peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2009 11:42:00 AM
wow big scary trouble this rite is so deeep to me cuz if someone knows about trouble i guess i have experience lovely rite mr.fuller keep writing ur awesome!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/18/2009 10:28:00 AM
I like the way it starts out like big trouble but then things are really okay.... good J.O.B. mike
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Date: 5/6/2009 10:48:00 PM
Excellent work, I like the use of the gerunds...Raul
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