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Growing I built castles with tinker toys Mountains with blocks Teddy bear he loved me Raggedy Ann she talked Will i be happy one day The magic eight ball answered yes I knew right away And never had to guess I drew pictures of pretty things Like weeping willow trees Tulips and daisies Swaying in the breeze Then came a strange silence Raggedy Ann spoke no more Teddy bear was still there But not like before It’s funny how life changes As you grow older day by day Colors slowly change But they never fade away I’m grown now There are things i must do And it’s not coloring pretty pictures Like i use to It’s real life Something the eight ball can’t predict Filled with pleasure and pain And many times, conflict As you grow, you’ll see What’s inside can bring rain or shine Don’t be alarmed if you get both At the same time Relax May you never stop growing No matter where you are No matter where you are going©

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/3/2012 10:49:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:28:00 PM
Beautiful concept of time and aging. I feel the same way. I too left my childhood, adolescence, and finally reached adulthood. I miss my childhood, but my memories keep it alive. Your poem expresses a great deal of imagery and that's what I like best about it. :)
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Date: 12/1/2011 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 3:19:00 PM
Enjoyed. Well, I'm getting old - 82 - and trying to "relax." You've heard of drive-by shootings? We had a walk-by shooting on our block the other day. Fortunately, no one hurt. Next door neighbors are moving out. I think I'll send them your poem. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:28:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, the beginning especially, with the wonderment of talking dolls and teddy bears as friends. Nice job!
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:26:00 PM
I have been in several situations where there was rain and sunshine at the same time and the rain overshadowed...Enjoyed your work very much this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:10:00 PM
Excellent message, Rhonda. Beautifully written. Enjoyed. Great Job. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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