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Ground Cover

the white feather-puffs
scattered upon the jade-moss —
nude fowl’s pluckiness

11/4/2018

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2018

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November 5, 2018 at 12:18 PM

This one's perfect Kim! Just love it Happy Monday xxoo

November 5, 2018 at 12:48 PM

Thanks, Mike! To you too!

Caren Krutsinger

November 5, 2018 at 10:16 AM

An imagery-laden haiku, my friend. Well done! Pluckiness, indeed along with nudity made it so funny!

November 5, 2018 at 10:30 AM

Thanks...lol

November 4, 2018 at 11:38 PM

Love the image Kim, they'll feel the cold now for sure . Tom.

November 5, 2018 at 3:27 AM

Thank you, Tom!

November 4, 2018 at 11:10 PM

:DDD! The imagery made me laugh....great to read this Monday morning! Love the word choice, and colour contrast word use...A fav.

November 5, 2018 at 3:27 AM

Thank you, Aqua! ...Kim

November 4, 2018 at 10:11 PM

Your imagery is amazing, Kim. Great last line, and title as well. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

November 5, 2018 at 3:26 AM

Thank you, Susan! Blessings...Kim

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