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the white feather-puffs scattered upon the jade-moss — nude fowl’s pluckiness 11/4/2018

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Date: 11/5/2018 12:18:00 PM
This one's perfect Kim! Just love it Happy Monday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thanks, Mike! To you too!
Date: 11/5/2018 10:16:00 AM
An imagery-laden haiku, my friend. Well done! Pluckiness, indeed along with nudity made it so funny!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 10:30:00 AM
Thanks...lol
Date: 11/4/2018 11:38:00 PM
Love the image Kim, they'll feel the cold now for sure . Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 3:27:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 11/4/2018 11:10:00 PM
:DDD! The imagery made me laugh....great to read this Monday morning! Love the word choice, and colour contrast word use...A fav.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 3:27:00 AM
Thank you, Aqua! ...Kim
Date: 11/4/2018 10:11:00 PM
Your imagery is amazing, Kim. Great last line, and title as well. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 3:26:00 AM
Thank you, Susan! Blessings...Kim

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