Groovy

groovy the vinyl splendidly spinning slowly going round and round 9/10/2010

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Chris Green

Date: 9/12/2018 1:21:00 PM

Slow down, you move too fast. You got to make the morning last. Just kicking down the cobble stones. Looking for fun and feelin' groovy...now I'm singing. Nicely done Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2018 2:42:00 PM

Thanks, Chris!

Lyric Man

Date: 9/12/2018 7:56:00 AM

Kim.. your Haiku takes me back. Nothing better than listening to vinyls with a sweet love!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2018 2:43:00 PM

For sure, dear Lyric!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/12/2018 5:19:00 AM

Perfection in a "groovy" poem. Luv it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2018 6:59:00 AM

Thank you, M.L.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2018 4:16:00 AM

I am picturing a wind spinner, but then also those barn topper spinners whose names I have forgotten. Am I on the right page?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2018 6:59:00 AM

Does it matter? I love how readers see what they see. Thank you, Caren!