Groovy

groovy the vinyl
splendidly spinning slowly
going round and round

9/10/2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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September 12, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Slow down, you move too fast. You got to make the morning last. Just kicking down the cobble stones. Looking for fun and feelin' groovy...now I'm singing. Nicely done Kim.
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September 12, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Thanks, Chris!
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September 12, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Kim.. your Haiku takes me back. Nothing better than listening to vinyls with a sweet love!
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September 12, 2018 at 2:43 PM
For sure, dear Lyric!
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September 12, 2018 at 5:19 AM
Perfection in a "groovy" poem. Luv it!
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September 12, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Thank you, M.L.
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September 12, 2018 at 4:16 AM
I am picturing a wind spinner, but then also those barn topper spinners whose names I have forgotten. Am I on the right page?
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September 12, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Does it matter? I love how readers see what they see. Thank you, Caren!
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