Notes About The Poem

Grizzly Bear

away 
 from human eyes
 a roar
 beat the air

 two look
 fishing
 cool creek 

7/9/2021

Photo 3
Picture This 2 - 7 Lines Poetry Contest
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Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2021 4:42:00 PM

great interpretation of the image, many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 7/14/2021 10:05:00 AM

Beautiful lines apt for the picture dear Eve... Congrats on your win.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Joseph May

Date: 7/14/2021 6:34:00 AM

Very nicely penned Eve, Congrats on your win

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/13/2021 8:57:00 PM

It's fun to imagine what bears are doing when no one's around. Your poem is quite realistic, with fine imagery. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Evelyn

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/13/2021 12:49:00 PM

cool poem, beary good my dear congrats :

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 7:26:00 PM

two look fishing cool creek Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/12/2021 4:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your great contest win; you deserve it with a very well-penned poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2021 10:18:00 AM

- Glad I did not meet these two on my walk in the woods today ... great written, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2021 3:32:00 AM

Probably I too would take extra notice if I felt Grizzly bears breathing down my neck!! ...otherwise fishing by a cool creek would be right up my street :) Hugs // paul

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/10/2021 2:04:00 PM

Them big Grizzlies sure like to gorge on the salmon Eve, for every one they catch a hundred plus get through the gauntlet, nice imagery best wishes for the contest, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/12/2021 1:04:00 PM

Good one Eve, must try that one out on the mother in law,

Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:47:00 PM

Thank you, David. I do love the outdoors, but not when bears around. My husband's dad use to tease me because I was so naïve; that if I placed cantaloupe at the bottom of your feet while I slept when out in the woods that they will stay away. :) Ha ha..