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away from human eyes a roar beat the air two look fishing cool creek 7/9/2021 Photo 3 Picture This 2 - 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 7/18/2021 4:42:00 PM
great interpretation of the image, many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:05:00 AM
Beautiful lines apt for the picture dear Eve... Congrats on your win.. Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/14/2021 6:34:00 AM
Very nicely penned Eve, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/13/2021 8:57:00 PM
It's fun to imagine what bears are doing when no one's around. Your poem is quite realistic, with fine imagery. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Evelyn
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Date: 7/13/2021 12:49:00 PM
cool poem, beary good my dear congrats :
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:26:00 PM
two look fishing cool creek Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2021 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your great contest win; you deserve it with a very well-penned poem.
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Date: 7/12/2021 10:18:00 AM
- Glad I did not meet these two on my walk in the woods today ... great written, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/11/2021 3:32:00 AM
Probably I too would take extra notice if I felt Grizzly bears breathing down my neck!! ...otherwise fishing by a cool creek would be right up my street :) Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/10/2021 2:04:00 PM
Them big Grizzlies sure like to gorge on the salmon Eve, for every one they catch a hundred plus get through the gauntlet, nice imagery best wishes for the contest, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/12/2021 1:04:00 PM
Good one Eve, must try that one out on the mother in law,
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:47:00 PM
Thank you, David. I do love the outdoors, but not when bears around. My husband's dad use to tease me because I was so naïve; that if I placed cantaloupe at the bottom of your feet while I slept when out in the woods that they will stay away. :) Ha ha..
Date: 7/10/2021 3:53:00 AM
Ah! Finally they see some food, good job, Eve:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:49:00 PM
Hello Jo, thank you. I hope the food is salmon :) Hugs Eve
Date: 7/9/2021 4:22:00 PM
Nothing better than finding those fish! (next to the honey!!)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:50:00 PM
They do love their fish and honey :) thank you for stopping by sweet lady. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/9/2021 1:09:00 PM
That's a great one. Good luck in the contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Paghunda, I hope the sponsor likes it. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/9/2021 10:37:00 AM
Better the salmon than an unsuspecting person. Good luck Eve, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:52:00 PM
I am glad you said that, Tom, yes, the grizzly is a dangerous bear. Thank you for the good luck. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/9/2021 9:30:00 AM
It many choose this image, you did it very well. All the best for contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Rama, and for the good luck. I need to catch-up to my readings. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2021 11:54:00 PM
Poor salmon. They make a tasty dish. Best for a win. Hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/10/2021 9:54:00 PM
Thank you, Victor, I sure hope so. I have fallen way behind in my poetry writing and reading as you know. Hugs Eve

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