Gripping Excitement

coupled in a kiss
of molasses: tongue senseless
wedged on a piercing


11/7/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 8:09 AM
delightful imagery ~ lol
Leffanta Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 4:14 PM
A new definition of, "piercing moment"! Aloha! Rico
Green Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 3:40 PM
That was cute Eve. That definitely paints a picture in my mind.
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