Grim

Gruesome of appearance, the dungeon a fearful place Rusty chains hanging down, iron maiden by the wall It was a harsh stern place that spoke volumes of pain Made worse by gloomy creepy shadows casting monsters written 08/24/2013 contest: Four Letter Words - An Acrostic Challenge

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 4:02:00 PM

Shadow, i like the word you write of... grim... congrats...Linda

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/5/2013 4:42:00 PM

hi Linda life can be grim sometimes ty Shadow x smile

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2013 1:52:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:52:00 PM

Hi Sara Ty for visiting my work again, also for congrats Shadow x smile

Donna Jones

Date: 9/1/2013 3:03:00 PM

This is very descriptive Shadow....congratulations

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 2:32:00 PM

hi Donna and ty so much am starting to feel better too hate being ill Shadow x smiles

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2013 2:13:00 PM

Shadow, congrats on your win with this descriptive acrostic! Love, Kim

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 2:32:00 PM

Hi Kim and ty glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 2:06:00 PM

Shadow, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 2:33:00 PM

hi Skat ty dear so glad you liked it Shadow x smiles

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/1/2013 1:07:00 AM

Well executed acrostic - the gruesome scenario works well to accentuate the title. Very well penned.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 2:34:00 PM

hi Vicky and Ty very much for comments and congrats Shadow x smiles

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2013 8:36:00 PM

you painted the grim scene well...congrats on your win :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 2:35:00 PM

Sandra hi and ty so much really nice of you Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2013 5:59:00 PM

I like the much description of a dungeon in this one. Congrats on your win, Shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 2:36:00 PM

Andrea hi and ty for liking it and for congrats Shadow x smiles

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/24/2013 6:35:00 PM

I like the mood of this piece. Great entry!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2013 6:56:00 PM

ty Richard have a great W/E dear Shadow x smile

Joseph May

Date: 8/24/2013 3:40:00 PM

you described it well Shadow...great write

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2013 6:26:00 PM

ty Joseph a fun contest gl to you too Shadow x smile

Donna Jones

Date: 8/24/2013 10:13:00 AM

Wow....awesome Shadow....

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2013 12:30:00 PM

Ty Donna appreciated Shadow x smile

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2013 7:38:00 AM

An interesting challenge and you came forth with an awesome work..Reads like winners' circle to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit of congrats..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2013 7:53:00 AM

It was a struggle hope I pulled it off Sara be interesting to read the others Ty for visiting Shadow x smile