Shadow Hamilton Poet Acrostic

Grim

Gruesome of appearance, the dungeon a fearful place
Rusty chains hanging down, iron maiden by the wall 
It was a harsh stern place that spoke volumes of pain
Made worse by gloomy creepy shadows casting monsters

written 08/24/2013

contest: Four Letter Words - An Acrostic Challenge

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Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2013 at 4:02 PM Shadow, i like the word you write of... grim... congrats...Linda Shadow Hamilton September 5, 2013 at 4:42 PM hi Linda life can be grim sometimes ty Shadow x smile

Sara Kendrick September 3, 2013 at 1:52 PM Congrats on your win..Sara Shadow Hamilton September 4, 2013 at 4:52 PM Hi Sara Ty for visiting my work again, also for congrats Shadow x smile

Donna Jones September 1, 2013 at 3:03 PM This is very descriptive Shadow....congratulations Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:32 PM hi Donna and ty so much am starting to feel better too hate being ill Shadow x smiles

Kim Merryman September 1, 2013 at 2:13 PM Shadow, congrats on your win with this descriptive acrostic! Love, Kim Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:32 PM Hi Kim and ty glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles

Skat A September 1, 2013 at 2:06 PM Shadow, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:33 PM hi Skat ty dear so glad you liked it Shadow x smiles

Vicky Tsiluma September 1, 2013 at 1:07 AM Well executed acrostic - the gruesome scenario works well to accentuate the title. Very well penned. Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:34 PM hi Vicky and Ty very much for comments and congrats Shadow x smiles

Sandra Adams August 31, 2013 at 8:36 PM you painted the grim scene well...congrats on your win :) Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:35 PM Sandra hi and ty so much really nice of you Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2013 at 5:59 PM I like the much description of a dungeon in this one. Congrats on your win, Shadow. Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:36 PM Andrea hi and ty for liking it and for congrats Shadow x smiles

Richard Lamoureux August 24, 2013 at 6:35 PM I like the mood of this piece. Great entry! Shadow Hamilton August 24, 2013 at 6:56 PM ty Richard have a great W/E dear Shadow x smile

Joseph May August 24, 2013 at 3:40 PM you described it well Shadow...great write Shadow Hamilton August 24, 2013 at 6:26 PM ty Joseph a fun contest gl to you too Shadow x smile

Donna Jones August 24, 2013 at 10:13 AM Wow....awesome Shadow.... Shadow Hamilton August 24, 2013 at 12:30 PM Ty Donna appreciated Shadow x smile

Sara Kendrick August 24, 2013 at 7:38 AM An interesting challenge and you came forth with an awesome work..Reads like winners' circle to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit of congrats..Sara Shadow Hamilton August 24, 2013 at 7:53 AM It was a struggle hope I pulled it off Sara be interesting to read the others Ty for visiting Shadow x smile