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Grilling

I tried to do some grilling But the sky just opened up And it rained like Noah’s time Each raindrop filled a cup I’m using here hyperbole To make a point of rain The grilling of the burgers Could not even begin So I used an indoor griddle To heat the burgers through It wasn’t quite that bad at all I was trying something new I think they were less healthy Since they sat in their own grease Where the grill would let it drizzle down And all that’s left was meat!

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Date: 2/7/2023 7:59:00 AM
You have a way of bringing to life an experience you had, and making it entertaining. It's getting near my lunch time, and I'm getting hungry for a grilled burger now.
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Date: 2/7/2023 5:09:00 AM
I was hanging out seeing if you could rhyme hyperbole :) good work either way
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Wolfgang Carl
Date: 2/7/2023 8:18:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback. I’ll take that as a challenge in the future!

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